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Oct 05, 2008
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A poem for Grandpa
A few weeks ago I had a mild heart attack,
while I was in the hospital my granddaughter
wrote a poem for me and I had debated with
myself weather to post it, but I just read it again,
and again I was moved by it so here it is,
but remember I'm bias.
What I see in grandpa
is someone really nice
and a really smart person.
Also I see a hard worker.
He is always there for me,
brain, and Beba. He is helpful
to the whole family. he actually
helped the country because
he used to work in the armey
but, he retired. Now he works
as a doorman he is still helpful
He writes great poetry. He
made us bank account for our
money too.He is a good man
Isabelle Pacis, 8 years old
(I typed it Just as she wrote it.)
while I was in the hospital my granddaughter
wrote a poem for me and I had debated with
myself weather to post it, but I just read it again,
and again I was moved by it so here it is,
but remember I'm bias.
What I see in grandpa
is someone really nice
and a really smart person.
Also I see a hard worker.
He is always there for me,
brain, and Beba. He is helpful
to the whole family. he actually
helped the country because
he used to work in the armey
but, he retired. Now he works
as a doorman he is still helpful
He writes great poetry. He
made us bank account for our
money too.He is a good man
Isabelle Pacis, 8 years old
(I typed it Just as she wrote it.)
— Eduardo Cruz, Oct 05, 2008
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Critiques
Rett
17 years 8 months ago
Aww that is sweet
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
It was,
Linda Moses
17 years 8 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
Hero
leonard daranjo
17 years 8 months ago
Hi Eduardo
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
Leo,
infinite_dwarf
17 years 8 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
Great idea,
Kailashana
17 years 8 months ago
O Eddie… you are
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
Anna,
themoonman
17 years 8 months ago
Eddie...
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
Broken Down,
yenti
17 years 8 months ago
Eduardo
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
Ian,
prayersbyPatty
17 years 8 months ago
Eddie, wow
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
Patty,