The Words

Simple story, Rhyme scheme, and rhythm fused into a sixteen line poem. I like the use of words and the final message it carries. This can only be done by one who has attained a level of mastership. Rett, you are the man. Cheers! T.

Slippery little devil aren't you Rett? Roflmarseo Love your sig line.... ~A

Mr. Sneaky takin' a peeky! Thank heavens she was hot, though.... That's much better than a 400 pound thunder thighs with HOT STUFF or something equally dumb printed on her shirt! LMAO! ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- - "Everyone needs believe in something. I believe I'll have another beer!" - "Constipated people don't give a shit..."

I guess this is one of those, you had to be there stories. It was a very funny story. Rett, Rett, Rett!! I like this poem good rhythm. "Letters were a-leaning" that's the one that made me laugh, only because I could see it. Hey the eyes must be feed also, and I'm sure they got full like a bulging belly. LOL!! thanks for the laugh! Eddie

Great poem Rett, Read right down to the last character(s) LOL Enjoyed, and I get a kick out of those out of whack older ladies donning that stuff. They become conversation pieces those folks ROTF Thanks, Mark Man thinks this.

I just ate. "Bootylicious"??? We have those here, as well. They all have the strut, too. Really puts you off on your food sometimes - or gives you uncontrollable giggles. 40DD in a super tight top struttin' around Wally world... *shakes head* and some women wonder why they're raped... Or they get offended when they see someone staring. Oh c'mon, you know you love it - who else in their right mind would prance about like that? *puts away soapbox and hands the boys a napkin* Men..... ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- - "Everyone needs believe in something. I believe I'll have another beer!" - "Constipated people don't give a shit..."

You've been looking, haven't you. I do have a question..how do you know they were silicone? or is it guy thing. You just know?

Well hmm a good job ya don't know but a back room job lmao well... they just buldge a bit in the wrong places or plain and simple - buldge or even backfire as in those guys professing to be doctors doing a 5 and dime job (hapens around here) omg funny ::swipes forehesd:: Mark Man thinks this.

'cuse me.. leaving the men's locker room now.... Asking for it, Jess? Rape is about power not about boobs. ~A

Hope your Eyes get better soon, after slip sliding THAT way, sometimes the eyes does things to the heart, you just take it easy ,you have been working so hard of late LOL..... Yours, Ian.T

There's nothing like a beautiful girl to make the day brighter. Some great levity here, too. Funny, clever and true. - vargo

Rett. It is amazing what you can read on T-shirts these days, the best though is when you go to a non-English speaking country and explain to someone just what that English slogan on their chest or back actually means lol...reactions are distinctly varied! Keith

let me chime in here at the locker room...lol... I've seen the same thing... makes my day! and hopefully, I'll always look.. at least while it's still interesting to me... the ladies... my wife catches me looking and I've seen her looking, nothing wrong in looking... it is the partaking that is the end all...or can be anyway... in my mind it is healthy to look around and notice the beauty of life and its participants... of course, that's just me... enjoyed your poem and the comments on it... Richard