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Barbara Writes
Barbara Writes
Oct 02, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Love By the River

Love By the River

A small cabin by the river
I stood along the shoreline
As the light of the moon cascades
Across shallow waters
Watching salmon leap
Biting at the moon

The firm grip of his sensuous hands
Caress my supple skin
Tossed into his arms
Our lovelock eyes quivering lips
Pursue kisses long and passionate
Burly knees lost its purpose

In the shadows of the night, our tangle bodies burn with desire
As passion Sussarate our love flowing as a river
   
— Barbara Writes, Oct 02, 2008

About This Poem

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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DarkinAZ

17 years 8 months ago

I loved this...

Very descriptive, Nice! Sincerely, Mark
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 8 months ago

Cindy

Smiles:) Barbara Thanks for reading glad you liked it Best wishes
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 8 months ago

Leonard

Smiles:) Barbara Appreciate your feedback. Thanks for reading and sharing your kind responses
Rett

Rett

17 years 8 months ago

Oops, didn't mean to peek

This is another beautiful write Barbara. Like Leonard, "Watching salmon leap, biting at the moon" captivated me. Great image. Respectfully, Rett: "Two things stand in the way of a liberal doing what he thinks is best for people. One, he doesn't have enough power and two, we have too much freedom. If he figures out how to overcome either then we are in real trouble." Rett
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 8 months ago

wow

If that ain't beautiful, I don't know what is. I echo the salmon and moon statements - what a line. Great job! Rett - never pictured you as the voyeur type.... lol! ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- "If you've ever emptied the back of your pickup truck by driving backward really fast and slamming on the brakes, you might be a redneck" - Jeff Foxworthy Bill Engvall: "that's how we moved"
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 8 months ago

Rett

Smiles:) Barbara As always your feedback is appreciate. Thanks for peeking and sharing your comments
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 8 months ago

Thanks Jess K

Smiles:) Barbara Thanks for coming by and reading. Your generous response is always welcome
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 8 months ago

Hey look, it's handsome!!!

Barbara I love this picture of your grandchild, Old lady!! LOL Great passion in this write almost reached an "X' rating, but you came to a screeching Holt at "R" nice job! Eddie
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 8 months ago

Eddie

Smiles:) Barbara Thanks for commenting. Glad you like the pic. old lady, not LOL did not want it to be "X" rated, glad it stop short.
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orgami

17 years 8 months ago

cool write

Amazing poem Barbara
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 8 months ago

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Smiles:) Barbara Appreciate your kind and generous comment. glad you enjoyed reading.