whitescatter

Oct 01, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Spent A Day With Him

his sympathy is calling you

hoping you'll stop on anything you do

he knows that you're feeling down and blue

he knows you need someone to talk to

all fears, all tears, all wars....He saw

spend a day with Jesus and miracle you will know

— whitescatter, Oct 01, 2008

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Laguna, PHL

Favorite Poets: William Shakespeare And the NeoPoet Family

Critiques

Kailashana

17 years 8 months ago

sigh…. just knowing that

sigh.... just knowing that we are not alone. Everyone needs to hear that now and then. ~A

Barbara Writes

17 years 8 months ago

Good one

Smiles:) Barbara Great writing indeed

weirdelf

16 years 4 months ago

last time I spent a day with Jesus

I nearly got crucified, cost me 30 pieces of silver to get out of it. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible

orgami

16 years 4 months ago

I am blind and deaf by my own seeing my own speaking all I see is self and hear only needy cries from my own cavity of ego within can this Jesus help me see? can he help my self help others? can he fill me like rains for thirtsty desert wanderings? I've never denied yet never asked so perhaps I might try doing believing

magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Great thinking Jas

Sure liked this one and it did make me stop and think. Very inspirational and feeling. Good write Ms Mona

weirdelf

16 years 4 months ago

"jesus died for somebodies sins, but not mine" Patti Smith

Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible

orgami

16 years 4 months ago

Jesus died for all our sins

He loved us so much! Our heavenly father has wonderous love

magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Thank you

Orgami this says it all to you so true. Love, Magics02

magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Beautiful

Jasper He who is My Valentine always and forever in my heart and is my heart. I so thank you for this poem this morning. Happy Valentines Day friend. Love, Magics02 "Determination Brings Success"