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Oct 01, 2008
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Another Death in Afghanistan
Tell me my dearest friend,
where on earth can I
be beautiful,
walk tall and proud
and be who I am
if not in Afghanistan?
Am I not so valued here
that I am
a sight not to behold,
Am I not so precious to you
that should anything
less than your image
of my perfection storm
dark in your raging
eyes,
my Beloved Afghanistan,
I should gladly spill my blood
thick and sweet,
and I should die silent
and speak no more of who's to blame.
where on earth can I
be beautiful,
walk tall and proud
and be who I am
if not in Afghanistan?
Am I not so valued here
that I am
a sight not to behold,
Am I not so precious to you
that should anything
less than your image
of my perfection storm
dark in your raging
eyes,
my Beloved Afghanistan,
I should gladly spill my blood
thick and sweet,
and I should die silent
and speak no more of who's to blame.
— Kailashana, Oct 01, 2008
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Critiques
bloodrina
17 years 8 months ago
WOW..its really great!
Kailashana
17 years 8 months ago
Although these
Atticus
17 years 8 months ago
excellent
Kailashana
17 years 8 months ago
Thank you, I am pleased all
DarkinAZ
17 years 8 months ago
Speechless...
Kailashana
17 years 8 months ago
Sometimes the less we say
Rett
17 years 8 months ago
AWESOME
Kailashana
17 years 8 months ago
I accept the bow on behalf
infinite_dwarf
17 years 8 months ago
Anna
Apostolos "Pau…
17 years 8 months ago
well done
Kailashana
17 years 8 months ago
Thank you Jess.Paul, “this
t. reflexion
17 years 8 months ago
Yayi dai-dai
Kailashana
17 years 8 months ago
Thank you for your thoughts
purplemoondoll
17 years 8 months ago
Stunning poetry. You ‘took
Kailashana
17 years 8 months ago
Kaz, you’re mending well
Cynthia Henson
17 years 8 months ago
Five !
infinite_dwarf
17 years 8 months ago
Anna
Barbara Writes
17 years 8 months ago
Tragedy of war
rider68
17 years 8 months ago
Dear Anna
Kailashana
17 years 8 months ago
Thanks to all who
themoonman
17 years 8 months ago
Anna...
barbsdad2003
17 years 8 months ago
Thanx, thanx, thanx
Rett
17 years 8 months ago
Hallelujah Chuck
Kailashana
17 years 8 months ago
The great harm religion has