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Sep 30, 2008
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The Blue House
I can't bring myself
to clean up my house.
I have shit everywhere,
ready to throw it all out.
But I can't.... No I won't,
it just wouldn't be me,
tomorrow I'll feel better,
it'll be spotlessly cleaned;
or maybe the next day,
it really doesn't matter
no-one I care to impress,
fuck it... I'll do it later.
to clean up my house.
I have shit everywhere,
ready to throw it all out.
But I can't.... No I won't,
it just wouldn't be me,
tomorrow I'll feel better,
it'll be spotlessly cleaned;
or maybe the next day,
it really doesn't matter
no-one I care to impress,
fuck it... I'll do it later.
— themoonman, Sep 30, 2008
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infinite_dwarf
17 years 8 months ago
LMAO!!
themoonman
17 years 8 months ago
Hi Jess...
DarkinAZ
17 years 8 months ago
I'd just throw it away...
themoonman
17 years 8 months ago
Hi Mark...
prayersbyPatty
17 years 8 months ago
Moon Man
themoonman
17 years 8 months ago
Patty...
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
Hey Richard
themoonman
17 years 8 months ago
Thanks Eddie...
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
no dream
blistered-pen
17 years 8 months ago
Hello
themoonman
17 years 8 months ago
there you are...
rider68
17 years 8 months ago
Hi Richard
themoonman
17 years 8 months ago
Peter...
whitetea
17 years 8 months ago
Ode to the House of Messy
themoonman
17 years 8 months ago
Hi Whitetea....
Janice Pearce
17 years 8 months ago
Moon
themoonman
17 years 8 months ago
Janice...
Cynthia Henson
17 years 8 months ago
Richard
themoonman
17 years 8 months ago
Hi Cindy...
Barbara Writes
17 years 8 months ago
Messy House
themoonman
17 years 8 months ago
Hi Barbara...
Barbara Writes
17 years 8 months ago
Hi Richard
leonard daranjo
17 years 8 months ago
A Revealing Write
themoonman
17 years 8 months ago
Hi Leonard...
Electric Blue
17 years 8 months ago
The blue House
themoonman
17 years 8 months ago
Hi Maggie...
Linda Moses
17 years 8 months ago
Richard
themoonman
17 years 8 months ago
Hi Linda...
ivanovich316
17 years 7 months ago
Great one!
themoonman
17 years 7 months ago
thanks John..
pinksheep
17 years 7 months ago
Good
themoonman
17 years 7 months ago
Hi Pink...
Sinbadthesailorman
16 years 10 months ago
agree110% I thought I'd throw all the tables and desks out first