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Nature Mithya
Sep 28, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Bedlam

Delight


— Nature Mithya, Sep 28, 2008

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Rett

Rett

17 years 8 months ago

Whew! wiping sweat

Quite the session. Well written without any crassness and the beauty of the moment shines through. Well done. Respectfully, Rett: "Two things stand in the way of a liberal doing what he thinks is best for people. One, he doesn't have enough power and two, we have too much freedom. If he figures out how to overcome either then we are in real trouble." Rett
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Nature Mithya

17 years 8 months ago

It is sheer pleasure....

To see you enjoy the poem. Hope by your encouragement I would be able to write and attempt better poems. Thank you from my heart.
weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 7 months ago

Great write,

as Rett says, it is truly an achievement to write erotic verse without becoming crass or tawdry. My only problem is the title. I get the pun, madness in bed, but bedlam itself has such negative connotations, it was the name of a notoriously cruel Mental Asylum in England. cheers, Jess
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Nature Mithya

17 years 7 months ago

lol

I am very conservative so should not have used or even written this type of a poem. Learning to be a poet, had to emphasize on new venture in bed; so Bedlam. True there is a pinch of insanity everywhere you see.