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Engine of Revelation

 when you are driven
by an inner compulsion
you are on your way

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 7 months ago

Inner passions

Smiles:) Barbara great short three lines, whether be love riches are fame, inner compulsion is the driver behind the wheel. one of your best senryu
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 7 months ago

Leonard

So much truth to this my friend! Nice~ "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers
Rett

Rett

17 years 7 months ago

Good one Leonard

Reminds me of the saying, "No matter where you go, there you are." Respectfully, Rett: "Two things stand in the way of a liberal doing what he thinks is best for people. One, he doesn't have enough power and two, we have too much freedom. If he figures out how to overcome either then we are in real trouble." Rett
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 7 months ago

Hi Leonard...

this is a great senryu, it shows how the title depicts the settings... for without that title one could say some inner compulsions lead you astray.. with the title chosen it sends the reader on an enlightened journey... well written friend... Richard