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shazbat
shazbat
Sep 26, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

tattooed lady




There was a young lady from DelhiWho had a tattoo on her bellyAs she got older, the tattoo got bolderAnd everything quivered like jelly
— shazbat, Sep 26, 2008

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Region, Country: Norfolk, UK, GBR

Favorite Poets: Kipling, T.S Eliot, Hilaire Belloc, Ogden Nash, Spike Milligan and many more.

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easylife_2

17 years 8 months ago

Enjoyable read

You have mastered the art of rhyming with fun writing which is very good.Thank you.
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Arrow

17 years 8 months ago

Limericks, yay!

I love a limerick. This one rolls well but for me, the ending would have been better if the last line were more closely related to the tattoo - a little more punch. I wasn't sure how this kind of verse would be received here but now that you've opened the door . . . Thanks!