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shazbat
shazbat
Sep 25, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Doggy Doos

Doggy Doos


Theres dog poo on the carpet mumTheres dog poo in the hallTheres dog poo on the door jamb mumTheres dog poo on the wall I don’t know how it got thereI havn’t got a clueI only know its smelly,And its on the sofa too
— shazbat, Sep 25, 2008

About This Poem

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Region, Country: Norfolk, UK, GBR

Favorite Poets: Kipling, T.S Eliot, Hilaire Belloc, Ogden Nash, Spike Milligan and many more.

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Critiques

Mark

Mark

17 years 8 months ago

A poem about

dog shit everywhere. Now I've sen everything (I think) Well done but the subject matter stinks. I have to wonder if you are younger than 13. Mark Old bandits are really young rascals.
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purplemoondoll

17 years 8 months ago

Made me smile and yes the

Made me smile and yes the subject matter stinks. Well done! (Moondoll trundles off for a long hot bath of sweet smelling bubbles!). Dog Poo - euch! Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 8 months ago

hmm....

This fastidious cat is chuckling - and will also promptly wash off her tainted furr.... Kaz - omg girl, where have you been?! Hope you're feeling better. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- "Johnny was a chemist’s son, but Johnny is no more. What Johnny thought was H2O, was really H2SO4...."
shazbat

shazbat

17 years 8 months ago

Doggy Doos

Well thank you for all of your kind comments, I'm glad you all enjoyed it. This was written on Thursday after my Granddaughter (who vocabulary consists of 2 words,Mum and Poo)came from the garden crying Mum Mum Mum and promptly dragged her Mother into the garden, to show her the mess that our dogs had just made, pointing to each one in turn saying "Mum poo" !