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Sounds Rattling

 

We’ve heard the rattle and rhythmic clingsOf metals, and woods and plasticsBreath out music; melodic inspirationsWe’ve even heard the dulcet humoursTunes of our hearts beat rhythmicallyAnd our troubles rest their tides But the rhythmic clings of terrorSound rattles of the rifflesAnd the millipede march of tanksIn and around our neighbourhoodsWe only hear music of cries, stenchOf fear and awful aroma of death Once, we honoured those gone before usThe interment jewels of dirgesIn celebration of heroism if not cowardice And reserved the songs of bliss for othersPeople, just us, now living funeral hymnsAwaiting the backup beats of TroopsAgainst the obsessed suicide explosives-The boom bangs of mass deaths
— WonderGolly, Sep 25, 2008

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Region, Country: Volta / GH, GHA

Favorite Poets: Kofi Awoonor, Kofi Anyidoho, ... :(

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poewriter58

17 years 7 months ago

Golly

Pardon me but while reading my mind added a couple of things The rattle I saw of chains "smokes of fear " I saw wisps of fear and thought it to gentle for the likes of this poem what about the stench of fear nice writing Chrys
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WonderGolly

17 years 7 months ago

Thanks Chrys

I'm convienced now that you have come to stay with me. Thanks for the suggestion and considering them, I will settle for "Stench of fear" and effect the change as soon as possible. If anything arise from the correction feel free to let me know. thank you best wishes. Wonder.