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Sep 24, 2008
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The Towers Fall
Shadows of colossus fall
upon the ground, like a
Roman sun dial annoucing
time that passes.
Standing like the Kings that
tower over all they see.
The Lords and ladies bow
to their towering Kings.
The kings have fallen, Oh
dear God, the Kings have
fallen!!!
The Lords and Ladies weep
to see their fallen Kings.
The Surfs and peasants come
rushing in, in hope of resurrecting
their mighty Kings.
All is loss the nation screams,
but wait, here come our mighty
knights. Trying to save all that
still might exist.
The nation thanks their mighty
Knights, who put their bodies
first, trying to save some life's.
Some were gained, and some
were loss.
Now there no more Kings.
A Prince stands alone over the
Empire.
upon the ground, like a
Roman sun dial annoucing
time that passes.
Standing like the Kings that
tower over all they see.
The Lords and ladies bow
to their towering Kings.
The kings have fallen, Oh
dear God, the Kings have
fallen!!!
The Lords and Ladies weep
to see their fallen Kings.
The Surfs and peasants come
rushing in, in hope of resurrecting
their mighty Kings.
All is loss the nation screams,
but wait, here come our mighty
knights. Trying to save all that
still might exist.
The nation thanks their mighty
Knights, who put their bodies
first, trying to save some life's.
Some were gained, and some
were loss.
Now there no more Kings.
A Prince stands alone over the
Empire.
— Eduardo Cruz, Sep 24, 2008
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Critiques
infinite_dwarf
17 years 8 months ago
Reminds me of ancient empires
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
hardcore, now that's cool!!!!!