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Electric Dreamscape

Beyond the frantic waves

That lick upward from an inferno

Lies the cold blue horizon

Shaped like a horses head

With stirrups in the hand

Of a faceless man
Headed towards an escarpment 

Jutting out into oblivion

There was lightening in the sky

Like congealed blood

In another part, 

The sky opens up

Like a woman’s vagina

Ready to swallow up 

The Universe



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Rett

Rett

17 years 7 months ago

Love the images

in this one. Great images and a fine write Leonard. I just have one question. "There is lightening in the sky" Did you mean the sky was lightening or there was lightning in the sky? Respectfully, Rett: "Two things stand in the way of a liberal doing what he thinks is best for people. One, he doesn't have enough power and two, we have too much freedom. If he figures out how to overcome either then we are in real trouble." Rett
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leonard daranjo

17 years 7 months ago

Thank you Rett

You are right - it should have "there was lightening in the sky" I have corrected. Thanks for pointing out the error. the very best ... Leonard