Walk-Ins

Who shall walk into
my Life today?
Who shall I be
on this great stage
of Reality?

But I am Dancer,
I am Love.

I am dark clouds forming
inside your eyes,
an Autumn rain.

I am a clap of thunder,
an ovation of pain,
surrender....

sweet sweet surrender.

— Kailashana, Sep 23, 2008

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weirdelf

17 years 8 months ago

aaah

I read it and smiled. Then read it and frowned. Then read it and re-read it. Then read it and cocked my head slightly in bemusement. Then read it again. Then went aaaaahhh... Have been having such resistance to sweet surrender lately the word had trouble getting past my optic nerve. Sweet! (in the cool sense, not the sugary sense) Thank you. cheers, Jess

Kailashana

17 years 8 months ago

;-)~A

;-) ~A