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Janice Pearce
Janice Pearce
Sep 23, 2008 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Haiku/Untitled



Weight of harvest moon
presses us into autumn's
embellished pages
— Janice Pearce, Sep 23, 2008

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Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 10 months ago

Leonard,

Hey, thanks for stopping by and your kind words. Maybee we ought to write one together? Two people, 17 syllables! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers
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leonard daranjo

17 years 10 months ago

Hi Janice

Sounds like a good idea. Why don't we team up for not just one but several haiku. Cheers... Leonard
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 10 months ago

Leonard

I'm game! lets do it, I'll private mesage you when I get a moment?? "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 10 months ago

Hi Jan

Liked this one. Two people 17 syllables? Sounds like my new rule. Left on red if nobody's coming. No wonder my family won't ride with me. LOL Patty
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barbsdad2003

17 years 10 months ago

I like the math:

two plus two equals two; twice 17 equals 17 A thought-provoking, creative difference from the otherwise usually routine (read: boring) four and 34. Looking backwar- --- er, forward to the prospect. Thanx, Chuck
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 10 months ago

Chuck

Just don't turn left on red as Patty does, and we will be all set! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 10 months ago

Ha Ha made you laugh

Just teasing her. I majored in math and can make 2+2 =5 by adding an A Patty
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orgami

17 years 9 months ago

Amazing poem

am reminded of childhood class activity pick a red maple leaf of fall and gently iron it between "wax sandwich" paper and hang it up on the window havent thought of that in years
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 9 months ago

~O

Hey there! Thanks for commenting. I was going to include "wax" in the haiku, but I thought no body is as old as I, to remember doing that in school. It was one of my favorite things to do with my mother at home too. Glad that you stopped by O~ "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

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