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Sep 21, 2008
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Gizzy Died
Simon's cat, Gizzy died on Thursday
my Skype was down for some unfathomable
reason and now it's as though nothing
happened in my world
but his best friend has died,
and I know what mourning is
in England or Ohio, the tears that flow
taste the same.
Wet and salty.
There are those who say: " Save your tears
for the living", there are those who say:
"Save your tears for humans."
I wonder what makes us human.
I wonder how we cross oceans.
I wonder if oceans are really human tears.
my Skype was down for some unfathomable
reason and now it's as though nothing
happened in my world
but his best friend has died,
and I know what mourning is
in England or Ohio, the tears that flow
taste the same.
Wet and salty.
There are those who say: " Save your tears
for the living", there are those who say:
"Save your tears for humans."
I wonder what makes us human.
I wonder how we cross oceans.
I wonder if oceans are really human tears.
— Kailashana, Sep 21, 2008
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Linda Moses
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Anna
Kailashana
17 years 8 months ago
I live in a suburb of
weirdelf
17 years 8 months ago
I held my cat Chinese in my arms while he died