Your Loving Face

to just sit with the Lord, and talk. I know us Christians can through prayer, yet I desire the flesh, Christ's hand in mine. I would love to play him a game of Chess too! I guess it's my sins which seperate us, we will see if I make to the big house in the sky, until then I guess he's just a heavenly pen-pal. Awesome write Linda! Your friend, Mark

Smiles:) Barbara nice image of a peaceful day with a best friend, being thankful of blessings experiencing a close relation with God is a privilege to enjoy.

Your poem is great, it carries a double meaning all the way through in consonance with your style of writing at times in two lines, so the structure and the message are shared to both the physical friend who the poet adores and the spiritual friend, who could be Christ or God Almighty. This adoration requires a quiet time, a moment of contemplation and prayer, not petitioning for anything, but just a sharing moment of love. The poet is the artist, painting the object and the shadow with every stroke of the brush and pen, in oil paint and ink, for our admiration. A very good write. Best wishes. T.

T. Reflexion is right on with his read of this write... a double meaning for sure. For each one that reads may see what they will... enjoy your writes... Richard

Linda, It's not easy for some people to talk to God, But in this write I can see your personal relationship with God. For me that's what makes this Poem/prayer so Beautiful. thanks for posting it, Eddie if a man does not know love, he does not know God

this poem is beautiful it speaks of the "rapture" I hear so much about the balance to me anyway

I enjoyed this poem, reminds me of a song.... Take me to that place Lord Where there is only me and you Longing for your presence I know that you're calling me to you. Here I stand and long for your embrace. Nothing else could ever take your place. Come holy spirit, fall in this place, I need more and more of you. Fill me again with the power of your spirit Lord, I'm crying out for more and more of You. (sorry to post long, but this song says best how I feel about your poem. Patty