When a New Dawn Peeps Through

The boat rocks

In a tumult of violent change

A pebble finds it way

To the bottom of the ocean

Awareness

Sucked into the core

Of its origin

Finds equilibrium

Ancient wisdom incubates

In a changing sea

Of changelessness

This lucid pool of liquid silence
Has an all embracing
Eloquence

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panaella

17 years 7 months ago

alliteration...

Hi Leonard, You write so elegantly!...loved the alliteration of ...'this lucid pool of liquid silence...etc...' You capture the peace and tranquility of silence in all your writes...it's a theme you have mined well...so well infact, I can't even begin to emulate...so won't!...lol Best Wishes, Ellie.

leonard daranjo

17 years 7 months ago

Thank you Ellie

I am honoured by your comment. You know what you have quoted "this lucid pool of liquid silence" sounds better than what I have writtens "this liquid pool of lucid silence" so I have changed it. Warm regards ... Leonard

Barbara Writes

17 years 7 months ago

tranquility

Smiles:) Barbara tranquility and beauty at the bottom of the ocean, better than being here sometimes, if only i was that pebble sinking enjoying that elegance. nice write well written.

leonard daranjo

17 years 7 months ago

Thank you Barbara

Appreciate your stopping by to read and comment. Kind regards ... Leonard

rider68

17 years 7 months ago

Hi Leonard

Its always a pleasure to stop and read your work my friend.....written with thought, "This lucid pool of liquid silence Has an all embracing Eloquence".................What A Great Line.......Beautiful..... Very Best Regards....Leonard Peter ~~~"I am not afraid of tomorrow, for I have seen yesterday, and I love today."~~~

leonard daranjo

17 years 7 months ago

Thank you Peter

Always a pleasure to have you stop by and read. Thanks a million. The very best to you ... Leonard

Mark

17 years 7 months ago

So pleasant to read

Leonard, I am not a technopoet so I tend to crit on trivialities. A pebble finds it's way or A way's pebble brings it told you huh? Not a technopoet lol Mark Walk me into the night and leave me there for I am not afraid. Just give me a ton of opiates ;)