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Sep 16, 2008
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Fall of Richmond
To be in a place
Which houses so much history
If one sits, they can almost hear the bugle.
Almost hear the cannons.
And the shouts of the fallen
As their fate is sealed
Amidst the rubble
Advancements and retreats
On both sides
False hope of a victory
Snuffed out by leading Generals.
Attack and counter attack
Waves of men fall
Acts of desperation
As the Confederacy blindly charges.
The advance to Petersburg
Was the beginning of the end.
And in the spring of '65
As Union forces stormed Richmond.
A mighty city had already fallen.
Burnt
Ruined
Lee admits defeat
And goes back to his home
Crowds pay their respects
To the hero of the South.
But all he does is silently bows.
And closes the door
On another chapter of history.
Which houses so much history
If one sits, they can almost hear the bugle.
Almost hear the cannons.
And the shouts of the fallen
As their fate is sealed
Amidst the rubble
Advancements and retreats
On both sides
False hope of a victory
Snuffed out by leading Generals.
Attack and counter attack
Waves of men fall
Acts of desperation
As the Confederacy blindly charges.
The advance to Petersburg
Was the beginning of the end.
And in the spring of '65
As Union forces stormed Richmond.
A mighty city had already fallen.
Burnt
Ruined
Lee admits defeat
And goes back to his home
Crowds pay their respects
To the hero of the South.
But all he does is silently bows.
And closes the door
On another chapter of history.
— infinite_dwarf, Sep 16, 2008
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Janice Pearce
17 years 8 months ago
Fall Of Richmond
Kailashana
17 years 8 months ago
“but all he does is silent
infinite_dwarf
17 years 8 months ago
Thank you
Kailashana
17 years 8 months ago
What an image! Very sad and
rider68
17 years 8 months ago
Hi Jess
Leeanne
17 years 8 months ago
WELL DONE
Linda Moses
17 years 8 months ago
Civil war
infinite_dwarf
17 years 8 months ago
Thanks again!
prayersbyPatty
17 years 8 months ago
Jess
poewriter58
17 years 8 months ago
Jess