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leonard daranjo

Sep 16, 2008 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

At The Altar of Progress- Maple Leaf Blues

a loon looks down on

a deserted inukshuk

and tortured landscape

— leonard daranjo, Sep 16, 2008

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17 years 10 months ago

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beautiful.

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leonard daranjo

17 years 10 months ago

Thanks a million

Your one word says a lot. Appreciate your stopping by. Cheers ... Leonard

17 years 10 months ago

yes. beautiful. the cry of

yes. beautiful. the cry of the loon is one of the loneliest, haunting sounds every heard. ~A

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leonard daranjo

17 years 10 months ago

Thanks Anna

Agree with you about the Loon's cry. Kind regards ... Leonard

17 years 10 months ago

Hi Leonard...

I love the poem, it could be literal or descriptive.. in either case a lonely scene... the title.. is that a double title , just wondering? loved this one..! Richard

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leonard daranjo

17 years 10 months ago

Thank you Richard

I am really happy that you loved the poem. Yes it is a double title - the second part was mentioned as an after thought with a view to throw some more light on the poem. Thanks again ... Leonard

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