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Sep 19, 2008
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Hell is a Swirling Sea
My mind circles endlessly
In a furious frenzy
Like a Cat trying to catch its own tail
No beginning; no ending
Just circles and circles
That revolve in a never ending cycle
I desperately try hard
To dive below the circles
But I am caught in the cross current
Of Thoughts bubbling
Like fishermen’s floats
Cast in a Choppy Sea
I can’t seem to penetrate
The inner sanctum
That has withdrawn into a tortoise shell
This cyclic thought process
Has me in a search
For a way out of this tumultuous hell
The only way out
Of this disarming distraction
Is indeed yet another distraction
So I try to think of things
But I am not really there
Because at the back of my mind
Is the endless bubbling
Of unfinished thought
Churning furiously in a vacuous state
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poewriter58
17 years 7 months ago
leonard
leonard daranjo
17 years 7 months ago
Thank You Chrys
Mark
17 years 7 months ago
Holy cow Leonard
Rett
17 years 7 months ago
Great write Leonard
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
Leonard