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MY HERO

MY HERO! I am helpless, cos am in my zero To muster strength, my stamina won’t permit Recharging my drive, yet not an impact Trusting, it be done by skill Nearly victimed me as the kill Is there a route, to reach it by a pill? My multiple efforts lay before me like a pack of cards I dare not live, like am zero I must connect a hero. My hero! Alas am just a zero A pinch of strength, can unleash my ego Guiding my drive, can make an impact A grinding file, sue will sharpen my skill Me a victor, sure will vanquish my captors O dear hero! I need you my mentor. My hero! Never do for me a fight, Sweat for me, to gain the might My hero! Just spare me the kill Who can tell? , yet I covet the skill So to stand alone unchallenged. My hero! I dare say to be a champion, As the champion, I made you my hero As life’s battle rages an onslaught Be by me, my invincible hero As I champion the path to my destiny Oh! My hero! I love you. Written 13/9/2008. 12:30am to 1:30am Felix Joseph Osaeghemede (+2348037825027) Lagos Nigeria. “As life’s storm rages on to swallow up our soul, if we choose to look within we will find our hero (Jesus) willing and ready to help) Felix o.j
— chumfin, Sep 13, 2008

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Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: KinG DaviD Psalms, King Solomon songs, maya angelou, and all the great poets i have ever meet.

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yenti

yenti

17 years 8 months ago

Your Hero

I really liked this piece it had a depth and meaning far deeper than one read could say Thank you, Yours Yenti
chumfin

chumfin

17 years 8 months ago

THANK YOU GREATLY.

DEAR SIR, I THANK YOU GRAETLY FOR YOUR KIND AND FRANK COMMENTS, IF GREAT MEN AS YOUR KIND REMARK THUS , THEN YOU HAVE FIRED ME GREATLY WITH THE ENCOURAGEMENT TO DO AND WRITE MORE BETTER POEMS. THANKS FOR THE ENCOURAGEMENT. I WOULD LIKE TO HAVE YOUR AS A FRIEND AND A MENTOR. THANK TO YOU. FELIX O. JOSEPH.