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Vehicular Fusion

Split the screen
With two separate vehicles.
One sports; one sedan.
A luxurious powerhouse.

Who says you can't have your cake
And eat it too?
The two vehicles merge.
To the 2009 Nissan Maxima
The four door sports car.

The synthesizer in the background.
And the lyrics:
"When you hear this sound a'comin
Hear the drummers drummin'
I want you to join together with the band." **
Brings the fusion point together....







** "Join Together" - by The Who all copy-writes apply.   The commercial is for the 2009 Nissan Maxima.  In it, it starts as a sports car, and a sedan in separate frames.  They eventually merge into the same car on the same frame as this song plays in the background - presumably for the "join together" aspect of it..
— infinite_dwarf, Sep 12, 2008

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Region, Country: North Carolina, USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.A. Poe, Lewis Carroll, Charles Bukowski, Michael McClure, Lawrence Ferlenghetti.

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poewriter58

17 years 8 months ago

Jess

You've done better it sounds more like an advertisement for this car than a poem or perhaps it would do better as a blog mom
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 8 months ago

Hi Jess...

where I thought you were going was playing an x-box game with split screens or another gaming system... then when I got to the end, I believe I remember seeing the two cars merge... maybe you could add to this one... Richard
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 8 months ago

I agree...

This is shit as far as I'm concerned. Anyone know how to permanently delete stuff, so that it doesn't even show under works list?? Next one will be better - I guess my enthusiasm for finding a song has no place in poetry!! LMAO!! Thanks guys. ~Jess ---------------------------------------------------- "Live every day as if it were your last; one day you'll be right...."