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Secrets & Sin
Thoughts drifting, glistening
Like crystals reflecting
From the morning sunlit surf,
Hopes dashed caught splashing
within the ebbing tide,
Life youth withering,
Beneath the sun drenched skies,
Time curves what is,
what was then, passing within
the blink of a sigh,
Feelings succumbed to moments,
when pain - hurting thoughts,
smack you right between the eyes,
He’s alone at land's edge, reminiscing,
As he falls to his knees
“Yes”
Just wondering, what the hell,
Staring upon the horizon,
As the memory of his love
drifted quietly by,
Trapped by conscience
And of aging guilt,
Situations left; like salt stains,
Etched upon the land
And truths forever lie
Entombed within the sand,
His tears bleed falling,
leaching sadness into his
cupped old hands,
grieving the outcome of friends
and of love.
of which both,
he has somewhat denied
Screams echoing thundering
from deep down inside,
remembering a time
to when shame stood by,
and Sodom rose
and Gomorrah posed,
yet lovers danced
swaying as one,
their souls embraced
and hearts entwined,
a momentary bliss
In the essence of time,
16th September 2008.
Comments
orgami
17 years 7 months ago
amazing ode
rider68
17 years 7 months ago
THanks O,...
Kailashana
17 years 7 months ago
Glad your muse has returned.
rider68
17 years 7 months ago
Hi Anna
leonard daranjo
17 years 7 months ago
Great Piece Peter
rider68
17 years 7 months ago
Hi Leonard
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
Welcome back!
rider68
17 years 7 months ago
Hi Jess
Janice Pearce
17 years 7 months ago
Secrets & Sin
rider68
17 years 7 months ago
Thank you
barbsdad2003
17 years 7 months ago
Aren't similes ...
rider68
17 years 7 months ago
Hi Chuck
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
touched me deeply and
Kailashana
17 years 7 months ago
Jess, do you ever miss
rider68
17 years 7 months ago
Touched me deeply
poewriter58
17 years 7 months ago
Peter
rider68
17 years 7 months ago
Hi Chrys
pinksheep
17 years 7 months ago
'Time
DarkinAZ
17 years 7 months ago
Very Good Write....
rider68
17 years 7 months ago
Hi Mark
Linda Moses
17 years 7 months ago
Peter
rider68
17 years 7 months ago
Thank you
Barbara Writes
17 years 7 months ago
Awesome read
rider68
17 years 7 months ago
Thanks Barbara
Barbara Writes
17 years 7 months ago
Hi Peter LOL, I only wish
rider68
17 years 7 months ago
Congrats Grandma
themoonman
17 years 7 months ago
Peter...
rider68
17 years 7 months ago
Hi Richard
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
Congrats!
rider68
17 years 7 months ago
Hi Jess
hillrider
17 years 7 months ago
Reminiscence
rider68
17 years 7 months ago
Hi Dale
prayersbyPatty
17 years 7 months ago
Secrets and sin
Rett
17 years 7 months ago
Peter, this one is a masterpiece
rider68
17 years 7 months ago
Thanks Rett
Rett
17 years 7 months ago
OOps, somehow it double posted. sorry