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leonard daranjo

Sep 15, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Inner Space Outer Decay

last wildernesses

i wish my head would open

and swallow them up

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17 years 7 months ago

Cool Leonard

Really cool. I like Senryu and Haiku very much and putting them together too. Bering it all home eh? The passion is shared. Mark

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leonard daranjo

17 years 7 months ago

Thanks mark

Yes - I really love this form. I seem to be able to focus better. Cheers ... Leonard

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orgami

17 years 7 months ago

great poem

last wilderness fresh take

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leonard daranjo

17 years 7 months ago

Thanks Orgami

For stopping by to read. Leonard

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17 years 7 months ago

Hi Leonard

You seem to be mastering this technique, yet again great thought lots shared with such few words...... Best regards... Peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~

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leonard daranjo

17 years 7 months ago

Hi Peter

Thanks a lot. I really appreciate your comments. Kind regards ... Leonard