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chumfin
chumfin
Sep 10, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

SEASIDE RHYTHYM

SEASIDE RHYTHYMS        Tonight my fairest queen       Lets listen to the seaside rhythms         Wa o! The waves is singing us a serenade            Wake up my love! Come catch a glimpse of this            Yes! The silver birds are ruling the airwaves              As nightingales they have set the tone               A kiss will spark the bliss                In a voyage to fantasy island                 A toast to celebrate our endless love tonight                   Its valentine,                    Come!                     Lets disconnect into the nights rhythm.     This is dedicated to my love VICTORIA. N.CLINTON IN PORT HACOURT. AM   FELIX OSAEGHEMEDE JOSEPH (+2348037825027)   Life has got its own rhythms, love only open your ears to its soothing melody. ( Felix.o j)
— chumfin, Sep 10, 2008

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Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: KinG DaviD Psalms, King Solomon songs, maya angelou, and all the great poets i have ever meet.

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17 years 8 months ago

Very romantic.

No suggestions for change. I loved the sense of urgency/thrill. The last line is great, with its sense of falling willingly into passion. "A kiss will spark the bliss" reads like a passionate caress in the night. Your beloved must have been pleased.
chumfin

chumfin

17 years 8 months ago

thankyou so much

i quite appreciateytour kind and also supple comment about my poem, if you do not mind, i would love to have you as one of my friends in this poet community. thanks alot felix oj