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WHO WILL LOVE ME?

     Who will love me? ,

   I ask?

  Even when love is so thick in the air

 The cold clasps of loneliness envelopes me

 Believe it,

 In the midst of a multitude am very lonely            

Can    fairness be mentioned of love?

 Now I beg, will some one love me?

Yes! To inject my soul with life 

As the patched dry earth groans for rain

So echoes my hearts cry, to fill its emptiness

Beyond this valentine,

I deserved to be loved by someone cool. 

 Will you love me?

So I can live again?

i just heard someone did,

Yes! The man from Galilee

He died for me. Because he loved me.

 Only him truly loves me,

Again! Who will love?

Just puzzle not,

I have found the love I need in Jesus.

Now I know, truly Jesus is love

Love is JESUS!

 

This goes to all the lonely heart this valentine worldwide.

Felix Osaeghemede Joseph

(+2348037825027)

 

 

 

 

 

LOVE EMBELLISHES VANITY, THAT WITHOUT IT ,  VANITY IS WORTHLESS

 

FELIX OJ

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— chumfin, Sep 09, 2008

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t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 9 months ago

Good work...

Chumfin The poet asks, 'Who will love me?', he desires fervently to be loved beyond the valentine. He then tells us that he has found love in Jesus. This is also very good, though there is underlying longing for more love, not spiritual love of Christ Jesus, but physical, when he asks, "Again! who will love?" Your poem is good and I like the flow. Well done and best wishes. T.
chumfin

chumfin

17 years 9 months ago

Dearest one,thank you

Dear T. i greatly appreciate your kind and modest response to my poem.keep it up the honesty. it is well with you.stay blessed.
faithmairee

faithmairee

15 years 11 months ago

Very Profound

This poem is very profound. I love how your words flow easily and with such sincerity. Very good writing! Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~
chumfin

chumfin

15 years 11 months ago

i thank you so much for

i thank you so much for taking time to read this poem, i never knew you would like it. thanks for coming to my page to read this. regards chumfin