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Electric Blue
Electric Blue
Sep 08, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

How do I love Thee

My Love
How do I love thee
But with all
my heart and soul

Every breath I take
every second
It is you
who fulfills me
Totally

No other Love
but thee
The truest
unconditional
Love
I have for you

You know this
You have shown me
The only love
where we are one
completely

I am there to
love and support
you
in everything
unconditionally

Waking in your embrace
you curled around me
is the only place
to be
Sing to my heart
forever.

— Electric Blue, Sep 08, 2008

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W.C.Wampler

17 years 9 months ago

How do I...

Electric Blue, You must write fast, then leave it as done. This is an emotional moment documented and shared, complete with an almost sacred undertone in the language. I'd like to see more of your work. wcw
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 9 months ago

How Do I love Thee

Hello WCW Thank you for your comments. I have again been recently inspired to write with someone in mind. My sacred emotions shared in the language of love. I will continue to write some new work and post it soon. Electic Blue
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 9 months ago

Love Poem

Smiles:) Barbara waking up in embraces is a fine way to wake up. good writing i like the peace presented here.
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 8 months ago

How do I love thee

hello Barbara I too like this line too. It is the only place i want to be. Thank you for your comments electricblue
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panaella

17 years 9 months ago

Christina Rosetti

Hello Maggie, Your poem...reminded me of a poem by Christina Rosetti...'Let me count the ways I love thee.'Which she wrote to her husband Robert Barratt Browning. I agree with Barbara...the line 'waking in your embrace you curled around me'....is just touching. Regards, Ellie.
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 8 months ago

How do I love thee

Ellie Thank you for you coments. I do not read the classics as i do tend to retain words. I do not want to take words or phrases by others. My work is originally my hopes dreams experiences etc.