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I Think Of You

When I am tired and I can go no more ………. I think of you

When I am by myself and am lonely ……….. I think of you

When life gets hard and I am weary ………. I think of you

When my best is just not good enough ……… I think of you

When I fail and don’t want to try again ……… I think of you

When I am unappreciated ……….. I think of you

When I sacrifice myself for others …………. I think of you


When you came from Heaven ……………….You thought of me

When you were tired and could go no more.. You thought of me

When you were alone ……………………….. … You thought of me

When your life was hard ……………………. You thought of me

When you traveled the earth ………………… You thought of me

When your best was still not good enough ….. You thought of me

When you sacrificed yourself for the world … You thought of me

When I dream of Heaven ……….I think of you thinking of me

 

Julie Hacker

09/05/2008

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Mohammad Yamin Iraqi

17 years 8 months ago

I Think of You

This is a well expressed inspirational poem. Very well presented, indeed. Mohammad
Rett

Rett

17 years 6 months ago

Julie

Well done. You may get comments about too much repetition in it, but I think in this case, the poem would lose the meaning if you didn't have it. That is the key to tis poems charm. Enjoyed it. Respectfully, Rett: "Life is like a beach. Salty, gritty, somewhat fishy and at other times, downright crabby" Rett: 2008