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Sep 05, 2008
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Rain
1.
the scent of rain
falls
inside the thunder
of my mind,
I close my eyes
and breathe the silence
2.
light breaks through
the forest canopy
presence is everywhere
3.
nondual erotica was
a red dragon that fell
asleep in my untamed heart
he awakens
i am nowhere to be seen
the scent of rain
falls
inside the thunder
of my mind,
I close my eyes
and breathe the silence
2.
light breaks through
the forest canopy
presence is everywhere
3.
nondual erotica was
a red dragon that fell
asleep in my untamed heart
he awakens
i am nowhere to be seen
— Kailashana, Sep 05, 2008
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Critiques
Barbara Writes
17 years 9 months ago
Just beautiful
weirdelf
17 years 9 months ago
kaila, I feel too cynical to reply to this right now
t. reflexion
17 years 9 months ago
I try to...
easylife_2
17 years 9 months ago
I get your
Kailashana
17 years 9 months ago
hmmm. as usual, poems have
barbsdad2003
17 years 9 months ago
Words like ...
Kailashana
17 years 9 months ago
When I first joined Neopoet,
weirdelf
17 years 9 months ago
ah, that's better
Kailashana
17 years 8 months ago
Jess, I should think you
orgami
17 years 8 months ago
Sitka spruce
Kailashana
17 years 8 months ago
ahh.. orgami…. you know