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DRIFTWOOD

 

‘DRIFTWOOD’

 

 

 

In my quiet contemplations

I see your face,

It drifts into my mind like

abstract driftwood,

washing up on my shoreline.

 

It needs a home; a calm scene.

In my hands it’s wondrous art-

Let it have a place at my

hearth- a decorous piece to be

admired.

 

The grain flows down to earth

my soul- the forgotten traces of

decay and baggage made

null by life’s experience.

 

You move me,

my beautiful driftwood art,

my future promise of the good-

Salvaged, from the wreckage

of your life.

 

 

 

Ellie LaCrosse.

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 8 months ago

driftwood

Smiles:) Barbara Beautiful job relating life to rotting wood drifting.
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panaella

17 years 8 months ago

salvage/salvation

Hi Barbara, Thank you...it tried to personify the driftwood as a wreck of a person...but how that very 'baggage' we all have makes us the beautiful individuals we are. The 'traces' are the things that make the stories. Ellie
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 8 months ago

driftwood

Smiles:) Barbara I love the theme of a wreck with baggage being a thing that makes beautiful.