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WonderGolly
Sep 01, 2008 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

A Heated Desire

I’ve seen and breath and felt

The woodworks

The earthworks

The weavings

The paintings

And the writings

Project images of realities

And my heart pound countless times

And restless like a heated desire

And I yearn to journey more

Into the past, and the present

And the days yet to show face

With the beauties of these hands

Mentored by the mind's eyes.

This heated desire  

Is a true journey to an origin

Of a magic world hidden inside us.

Golly .K. Wonder

 

— WonderGolly, Sep 01, 2008

About the Author

Region, Country: Volta / GH, GHA

Favorite Poets: Kofi Awoonor, Kofi Anyidoho, ... :(

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themoonman

themoonman

17 years 10 months ago

the mind's eye is pleased

and the soul smiles... loved the idea your poem was layered with... I think you need a bit of editing... some of it sounds out loud like broken English.. please don't take offense, you are already doing better than I, I only speak the one language.. like I said, I love where the poem takes me... so it does work now.. I just think it could be better.. Welcome to the site.. this was a good one for you to start here with.. excellent theme! Richard
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 10 months ago

Hi Golly

Smiles:) Barbara heated desire a nice title, i can see the love of writing poetry in your poem.
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WonderGolly

17 years 10 months ago

Your guess is correct

Poetry is everything, miss or mrs. Barbara. It is a dream I look forward to come true and your site/home has openly and friendly join hands to fulfilling this dream. "all poets are seers... all seers are poets" If this is right then You have eyes. Greetings.
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WonderGolly

17 years 10 months ago

Cool!!,,,,''''''

Thanks for the welcome... It is so touching... I really appreciate it... We will catch up well... trust me... Wonder.

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