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Sep 01, 2008
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4 Poems of Reflection
1
Quo Vadis?
Love
wrest me from this moment
of indecision and doubt,
let me create
a sanctuary
where only You exist
2.
Step Away From The Center
Step away
from the center
and the separation begins,
a placid lake
a tossed stone,
a ripple forms
open
a clenched fist
a ravaged breast
a distant heart,
now
breathe through the opening….
3.
It Was Only A Fantasy
It was only a fantasy
love can never speak
in the Silence we seek,
we are lonely in the folds of flesh,
aching to be touched,
weeping
divisions of a solitary image
burning in our hearts
4,
Understanding
is a perfect snowflake
m
e
l
t
i
n
g
Quo Vadis?
Love
wrest me from this moment
of indecision and doubt,
let me create
a sanctuary
where only You exist
2.
Step Away From The Center
Step away
from the center
and the separation begins,
a placid lake
a tossed stone,
a ripple forms
open
a clenched fist
a ravaged breast
a distant heart,
now
breathe through the opening….
3.
It Was Only A Fantasy
It was only a fantasy
love can never speak
in the Silence we seek,
we are lonely in the folds of flesh,
aching to be touched,
weeping
divisions of a solitary image
burning in our hearts
4,
Understanding
is a perfect snowflake
m
e
l
t
i
n
g
— Kailashana, Sep 01, 2008
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Critiques
t. reflexion
17 years 10 months ago
Anna
Kailashana
17 years 10 months ago
Free?~A
akabeks
17 years 10 months ago
very romantic.
Kailashana
17 years 10 months ago
yes…. if we allow it….
barbsdad2003
17 years 10 months ago
I'm quite surprised ...
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