She Seeks His Demise

This is gutsier stuff than I have read before from you Barbara. The vitriol, the power! The meek will get their own back! All power to you! cheers, Jess

The poet seems to say that the man may be physically stronger than the woman, so she may not be able to flog him when she is angry. But she can use her mouth to do damages that may surpass him. For example in quarrels, and for most men, war of mouth turns them off, even making the vital organ go limp. I can hear a man saying, "As your mouth is strong, make your hand equally strong to take me on." (LAUGHS) I like this piece. I don't like men hitting their wives, but You can see the issue raised in this poem in almost every home. Good write. Cheers.

an excellent piece Barbara... very funny too because almost every man can see the tigress he's married to... very good! ready to pounce... loved it.. two-edge.. two-edged venom spew.. venom spews loved the ending.. tell your husband hello for us... Richard

You seem to being going from strengh to strengh... have read all the comments and have to agree with them all, Just let me know when you publish your book, really liked this poem, clever, brilliant, loved it, Very best regards.... Peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~

what she wants lol Mark

Your words evoke so much power,you are growing from strength to strength!Thank you.

So I can lock myself in. Your Hubby is welcome to join me if he thinks the door with withstand the venomous acid words. Barbara, this is outstanding!To copy an old phrase "you go girl"! Damn fine writing! Tell hubby hello from an old Texan. Respectfully, Rett: "The only thing observable with the naked eye to exceed the speed of light is rumor" Unknown

Barbara, you seem to be a nice person, but here you've written an angry poem. So it goes out of your character, and rages out of control. Unless of course, you're a witch, working some voodoo, and I don't have a clue. WCW

Smile, you're in the spotlight! Respectfully, Rett: "The only thing observable with the naked eye to exceed the speed of light is rumor" Unknown

Barbara, If your intent was to created fear, you acomplished it. I was moved by the strengh it takes for someone to use words to destroy a person, when what they really want is to pound on them, something that can be seen. where as with words the attack is inside their mind and the scaring is perminent. there was a lot of pain in this work. For me pain and love are the best tools for poetry. thank you I really love it when it comes from deep inside. thanks again Eduardo (Eddie)

So boldly and so rawly you have pictured the world's precious intimacy.

my ex, and the heart strings she still tries to pull of mine, control....uhg! Nice write, Mark

Hi Barbara, This is venemous all right!...pow!...It is almost psychopathic in it's execution. Don't mess the woman around, right?...The acknowledgement that women use the power of words...the imagery of the mouth, ripping into the male 'animal'. Very strong. Bet the blokes don't appreciate it as much! (only kidding!...before I get a storm of protest) I like your work Barbara. Ellie.

Hello Barbara...Your mastery on the pen is absolute...there has to be a reason behind this creation...can only guess...very interesting indeed. Rahbar.

I love this piece. I agree with Peter - You are going from strength to strength. Look forward to reading more from you. Warm regards ... Leonard

Barbara, Wow, you go girl~ "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

Talk about arch your back and hiss.... Even I'm afeared, and I'm a girl! LOL! Nice job, Barbara. ~Jess ---------------------------------------------------- "Live every day as if it were your last; one day you'll be right...."