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Rett
Rett
Aug 30, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Windblown Wishes

Windblown Wishes

Windblown wishes
Dreams in jars
Angel's kisses
Falling stars

Greener pastures
Clearer skies
Mother's dreams
Baby cries

Silver dollars
Young boys smile
Cotton candy
Stay awhile

Chiffon dresses
Country dance
Winking eyes
Quick shy glance

Wedding chapel
Say I do
Honeymoon
Time just flew

Windblown wishes
Clearer skies
Angels kisses
Baby cries

— Rett, Aug 30, 2008

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Region, Country: Southern Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: Dickenson, Longfellow

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themoonman

themoonman

17 years 9 months ago

Windblown Wishes...

Rett.. this windy poem says quite a bit... and most poeticly too... very good skills Richard
Rett

Rett

17 years 9 months ago

Thank you Richard

I assume you caught the complete circle of generations. I appreciate it sir. Respectfully, Rett: "The only thing observable with the naked eye to exceed the speed of light is rumor" Unknown
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 9 months ago

oh yes...

from your birth to your first born's.. or whoever your subject was.. I assumed it was about you.. the circle of life continues.. your poem could go on forever... your friend Richard
Rett

Rett

17 years 9 months ago

dead on Richard

You hit it my friend. Respectfully, Rett: "The only thing observable with the naked eye to exceed the speed of light is rumor" Unknown
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 9 months ago

Nice poem

Smiles:) Barbara I see how you made the generation flow from one to the next. this is really good writing
Rett

Rett

17 years 9 months ago

Thank you bright eyes

*G* I appreciate it a lot. Still love that smile and tan. I have a couple of leather jackets too. One from my motorcycle days (with chaps) and one dress jacket. Looking forward to your next poem. Respectfully, Rett: "The only thing observable with the naked eye to exceed the speed of light is rumor" Unknown
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Cynthia Henson

17 years 9 months ago

Rett ...

You said it all perfect in such a simple way. I really really liked it. Great job. Best wishes, Cindy
Rett

Rett

17 years 9 months ago

Thank you Cindy

I truly appreciate it. Glad you enjoyed. Respectfully, Rett: "The only thing observable with the naked eye to exceed the speed of light is rumor" Unknown
R

rider68

17 years 9 months ago

Hi Rett

I can only add my support, loved the theme, and would like to be objective, But then I am bias, your consistent varied turn out, is to be applauded, Take care & best regards.......Peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~
Rett

Rett

17 years 9 months ago

Thanks

I appreciate it my friend. I get bored with the same subject all the time so like to do different things. I appreciate it. Respectfully, Rett: "The only thing observable with the naked eye to exceed the speed of light is rumor" Unknown
Rett

Rett

17 years 9 months ago

I'm guilty Jess

Sometimes I write mush and I appreciate the comment my friend. Hope it didn't gag you too bad. Respectfully, Rett: "The only thing observable with the naked eye to exceed the speed of light is rumor" Unknown
Rett

Rett

17 years 9 months ago

Thank you Mark

Like you new pic man. Funny, you DO look like a redneck. *LOL* Wouldn't have thought that of a yankee. *G* just kidding. Respectfully, Rett: "The only thing observable with the naked eye to exceed the speed of light is rumor" Unknown
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 9 months ago

Your new student

Rett, I carry my black slate and chalk into your class as a student to learn Aa Bb Cc. I like the style, short lines loaded with unspoken words. Teach me, I beg of, to tell the story of my life with few words. Well done and cheers! T
Rett

Rett

17 years 9 months ago

Wow, Praise from someone as good as you

should be reflected back on the giver as he is already a writer of high standards. Thank you very much sir. Respectfully, Rett: "The only thing observable with the naked eye to exceed the speed of light is rumor" Unknown
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 9 months ago

Rett

and time does fly. I liked the simplicity,yet completeness of this
Rett

Rett

17 years 9 months ago

Thank you very much Linda

That and a couple of more I have written in that vein are maybe the hardest I have ever written. Glad you enjoyed it. Respectfully, Rett: "The only thing observable with the naked eye to exceed the speed of light is rumor" Unknown