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Aug 29, 2008
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MoonShrine
MoonShrine
Deep in the dales of Halleck
Lie the ruins of a great shrine
And there stands an altar
Carved of pure white stone
This is a place of moon-magic
Meant for women alone
But few are those that venture
To place offerings upon the stone
It's said that when the moon's full
The shrine glows with pale light
And on those nights are granted
A maidens most true desire
But danger lies in the old lore
No gift is without price
And those that dare the old ways
Oft pay with their very life
If you visit the dales of Halleck
And happen upon the shrine
Play not with the forces there
Nor speak your innermost thoughts
Beware the gifts of those long gone
You maidens who dare tread
The paths walked by the old ones
Deep in the Moon-Goddess Shrine
With deep respect to the late great Andre Norton whose "Witch World" novels inspired this poem.
Deep in the dales of Halleck
Lie the ruins of a great shrine
And there stands an altar
Carved of pure white stone
This is a place of moon-magic
Meant for women alone
But few are those that venture
To place offerings upon the stone
It's said that when the moon's full
The shrine glows with pale light
And on those nights are granted
A maidens most true desire
But danger lies in the old lore
No gift is without price
And those that dare the old ways
Oft pay with their very life
If you visit the dales of Halleck
And happen upon the shrine
Play not with the forces there
Nor speak your innermost thoughts
Beware the gifts of those long gone
You maidens who dare tread
The paths walked by the old ones
Deep in the Moon-Goddess Shrine
With deep respect to the late great Andre Norton whose "Witch World" novels inspired this poem.
— Rett, Aug 29, 2008
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easylife_2
17 years 9 months ago
This is very good Rett
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thanks Easy
Barbara Writes
17 years 9 months ago
This is amazing greatness
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you Barbara
akabeks
17 years 9 months ago
the devils gift...
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thanks Akabets
t. reflexion
17 years 9 months ago
Take me to...
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you so much T.
Kailashana
17 years 9 months ago
Hi Rett! I am unfamiliar
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
I remember that movie