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Aug 28, 2008
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The Mary Lou
The Mary Lou
She was ten days from Nantucket
When the sky, it turned to black.
The skipper cried to his crew,
"Boys we're in its track!"
Wind came howling from the north,
With waves three stories high.
The skipper yelled, "Brace yourself,
And pray we don't all die!"
The deck was slick; the sails all furled,
They tossed the storm-anchor out.
The storm striking like Neptune's wrath,
The craft was spun about.
There came a sick'ning crack
As the anchor-plate tore free!
The sturdy mast was snapped in two
And no mercy had the sea...
The craft was tossed and timbers smashed,
Captain and crew all drowned,
Sad memories are all that's left,
For the Mary Lou went down...
She was ten days from Nantucket
When the sky, it turned to black.
The skipper cried to his crew,
"Boys we're in its track!"
Wind came howling from the north,
With waves three stories high.
The skipper yelled, "Brace yourself,
And pray we don't all die!"
The deck was slick; the sails all furled,
They tossed the storm-anchor out.
The storm striking like Neptune's wrath,
The craft was spun about.
There came a sick'ning crack
As the anchor-plate tore free!
The sturdy mast was snapped in two
And no mercy had the sea...
The craft was tossed and timbers smashed,
Captain and crew all drowned,
Sad memories are all that's left,
For the Mary Lou went down...
— Rett, Aug 28, 2008
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Critiques
DarkinAZ
17 years 9 months ago
I forsee a Spotlight...
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thanks nephew
Barbara Writes
17 years 9 months ago
Nice fictional story
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thanks my friend
themoonman
17 years 9 months ago
The Mary Lou...
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
ROTFLMAO
yenti
17 years 9 months ago
THE BEVERLY ANN ---A Boat LOL
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
I'll get you for this Ian
yenti
17 years 9 months ago
The Poem
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thanks Janice
Linda Moses
17 years 9 months ago
Rett
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you very much Linda
infinite_dwarf
17 years 9 months ago
Rett
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
That was a fantastic movie
amalzamani
17 years 9 months ago
Excellent
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you very much Amalzamai
easylife_2
17 years 9 months ago
Good write
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thanks a lot easy
Janice Pearce
17 years 9 months ago
The Mary Lou
Rett
17 years 8 months ago
Ahhh, Gordon Lighfoot