Betrayal

Wow thanks mate, you must have pick this up, the minute i pressed the send button, Please note/see your input has been received and i have amended accordingly, thanks for helping, like i have read over this - so many times, mad that i failed to pick up on something so in your face, One day hopefully i will produce something near as dam perfect, But till that time please continue to be the friend you have been,..... As to the fine wine, well love wine, never seems to be able to sit, without getting hammered, Here's me raising a toast to great friends, thanks again, Be well and take care.... with great respects...peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~

Thanks for your thoughts and comments,something slightly diferent, but to be honest still not quite sure about it, maybe trying to hard? But still..That's the whole point, what with yourself, and others on this page, It's becoming harder to either find a subject. or try something, just so we can continue to strive forward, But then saying that you seem to be pulling new work out of a bottomless bag,>>>>>>>>Must say I love your work, Take care...and best regards, Peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~

Got to say, I've read this back so many times, Yet' until I read your post, Have to say mate........spot on, Hands up Yes it's cheesy, You know us Brits are known to be a bit eccentric, not to sure what tangent I slip into too, but I will come back and think it through again, As for the wine....would be great...only the wine would travel better than me, would die on that long haul flight, about 4hrs is as much as I can stand, And as for friendship....was it any other way, I suppose I to blame in as far as not making an effort at times, But i saw you Jess, no other way But an Neopoet Friend........ Here's raising a glass in Great Friends.....cheers, Very Best Regards... Peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~

Got to say.....your looking great with the new photo, Keep promising to change mine.....I look like a right sad old sod, As to the poem....I think I've covered the points to Jess, If i had half a brain i should have put to you both, Having said that, the ye bit really dosn't work.... does it, but i will change, Your sharp eye, picked up the "New" yes your right - It should be "knew" again thanks, I will change...... And as for the wine.......What we really need is an internet Cafe/Bar, That would be something ....Ah, Or better still, A mens only club,......watch the fallout over that comment... I think I'd best leave it there, Thanks Richard...I would love to be able to bye the round, But take care.. Very Best regards......Peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~

Thankyou for reading, and thanks for seeing the depth, it's what i wanted to put across, I will re-dress this though, need to change one or two points, But overall i am fairly pleased, Thank you again..... Kindest Regards....... Peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~