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Aug 26, 2008
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I Still Hold Her Hand
I Still Hold Her Hand
Stars glow like diamonds
On a tapestry of night.
The moon a milky opal
Viewed by candle light
Amber sparkles in her eyes
Like softly glowing coals.
Hair wild as a storm-tossed sea
That breaks on rocky shoals.
A lovely, spicy fragrance
That lingers in one's nose.
A tinkling, bell-like laughter
That lightens up the soul.
Thirty plus years of happiness
Wrapped in a golden band.
Thirty-four years of tenderness
And I still hold her hand!
8/29/96
(revised 3/1/00)
(revised 8/6/08)
Stars glow like diamonds
On a tapestry of night.
The moon a milky opal
Viewed by candle light
Amber sparkles in her eyes
Like softly glowing coals.
Hair wild as a storm-tossed sea
That breaks on rocky shoals.
A lovely, spicy fragrance
That lingers in one's nose.
A tinkling, bell-like laughter
That lightens up the soul.
Thirty plus years of happiness
Wrapped in a golden band.
Thirty-four years of tenderness
And I still hold her hand!
8/29/96
(revised 3/1/00)
(revised 8/6/08)
— Rett, Aug 26, 2008
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Critiques
DarkinAZ
17 years 9 months ago
Great write!
infinite_dwarf
17 years 9 months ago
Hmmm....
DarkinAZ
17 years 9 months ago
Good point Jess...
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thanks for the giggle Jess
orgami
17 years 9 months ago
the grand band
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thanks Orgami
Candlewitch
17 years 9 months ago
:)
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Awesome Cat!
Barbara Writes
17 years 9 months ago
Holding hands
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
I understand Barbara
easylife_2
17 years 9 months ago
Very good write Rett
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you easy
Linda Moses
17 years 9 months ago
Rett
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you Linda
prayersbyPatty
17 years 9 months ago
Nice poem for couples.
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thanks so much Patty