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Happiness Not Your Own
If you make your self responsible for another’s happiness,
You’ll lose yourself and your self respect
You’ll fall to the ground in utter distress.
Your nights will be filled with torment and a complete lack of rest.
You will end every day crying you did your best.
You will wring your hands and beat your chest.
You will run back and forth your life a total mess.
Everything will crumble though you protest.
Fights will break out and there maybe arrests.
In the end you will fail and what did you expect?
You throw away every ones last bet.
Having learned now nothing will work in retrospect.
Once you’ve allowed your own neglect.
Take heed and remember these words don’t reject
In each of our lives we have to elect
to allow the treatment we expect
What ever we accept is what we will get.
If we are willing to abuse ourselves in loves quest
Then go right a head read this poem
as just a playful jest.
Critiques
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Bravo!!! Applause
autumnphoenix
17 years 9 months ago
Thanks Rett,
yenti
17 years 9 months ago
not your own
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Dr. Who is Who's Dr.?
autumnphoenix
17 years 9 months ago
Now Boys,
easylife_2
17 years 9 months ago
Good write
autumnphoenix
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you
Janice Pearce
17 years 9 months ago
Dana
autumnphoenix
17 years 9 months ago
Hi Janice
Candlewitch
17 years 9 months ago
Dana
autumnphoenix
17 years 9 months ago
Hi Cat
weirdelf
17 years 9 months ago
Oh Ow!
autumnphoenix
17 years 9 months ago
So say I,