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Rio_SU_Kashyap
Aug 25, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

I have a Problem

When the world suffers,I have a problem. When somewhere, a natural calamity strucks,I have a problem. When there is global warming,I have a problem. When my country isn’t progressing,I have a problem. When my family, friends suffer,I have a problem. BUT……….. When there is a war,I have more problems. When somewhere, a man-made calamity strucks,I have more problems. When there is pollution,I have more problems. When there is corruption,I have more problems. When my country suffers,I have more problems. “ I HAVE SO MANY PROBLEMS ” —THIS IS MY ONLY PROBLEM…..
— Rio_SU_Kashyap, Aug 25, 2008

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akabeks

17 years 9 months ago

Problems ......wahala....

my dear,life goes on...... when the west force their policies down our throat,i have a problem... when Bush bomb Iraq,Afganistan..., i have a problem... When Russia harass Georgia,i have a problem... when hurricane cane our existence, i have wahala.... the world is an animal farm... it has become difficult to differentiate between a kiss and a bite... akabeks.
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WonderGolly

17 years 9 months ago

I share you sentiments

the world is turning into something else... We can only pray... So let us pray... "Our father... Who art in Heaven..."
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rohith

17 years 8 months ago

my desi friend...

My desi friend yes world do have so many problems and we also do have responsiblity to think of them and if possible even to solve them but there is no use in thinling it as a big problem and telling that i have lot of burden on my shoulders.Oh sorry for being so rude. Im rohith from india itself and wishing if you want to add me as a friend.
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Benjamin1987

16 years 6 months ago

Very good piece. I like the

Very good piece. I like the repetition. This repetition brings the point of your piece out and serves to make it pop out even more. You have a point that there are many problems in the world, whether they are caused by nature or man. I feel that one person's problem(s) is another person's problem(s). This is conveyed in this piece very well. On the other hand one person can make a difference and that is something else that i get from this piece.