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my sullied inattention


my sullied inattention


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a piffling passenger
in this quotidian boat,
I squat---yet lashed to mama's
quagmired, quandaried
earth---to quinse a qualmish,
queachy squib: a queasied
quiddity, though perhaps
a witless quoz ...
                                  ---barbsdad
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[b]ut shall be
overtaken unaware

                                   ---Khayyam
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nature's fatted greens
so seek to overwhelm
as late spring ends/
so summer then begins

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I pay no notice of it
in particular, so much
as is my wont ... or habit

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I finger-choose but few
plants wild this facund morn,

selecting, for my paltry
breakfast's chain of green
reared raw,

from backyard acre's birdsong-
lauded, mizmazed jumble

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at the point of done, I peer
to vet the what that loafs
atop the meager

elsewise contents of
my hand-scrubbed bowl

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with a start, I wake
to bear bare conscious note:

so few greens;
they underwhelm


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as boldly incandescent sol,
seemed jessant, burns,
blasts gold through sweltry

air to green receptive
earth, curved sky about
such roguish sun lies pallid

a subservient milksop
mythic blue with mingled
tinct of muted buttercup

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I pay no notice of it
in particular, so much
as is my wont ... or habit

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yet grossly unaware
of proximate present,

my sullen mind given
so to mulling over
otherwhiles, otherwheres,

I eat

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infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 8 months ago

Chuckles

Wow, somebody had their dictionary open to the Q entries! I don't think I've ever seen breakfast written so eloquently. Nice job. ~Jess ---------------------------------------------------- "I hope no one asks me to show them the ropes; I have no idea where they are. Maybe I can pull some strings and find out...." - George Carlin
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barbsdad2003

17 years 8 months ago

Actually, Jess ...

this really isn't about breakfast ... or even the prep for it. The title gives a strong clue as to what it is about. Another might be derived from a careful note by a reader as to what might be behind my choice of when to italicize. Yours, Chuck