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Live and Die

I lie
live and die
between
your open
and very inviting
legs

oh glory be
praise the sacredness
of true womanhood

I'm gladly trapped
a joyous prisoner
playing with you
playing with my thoughts
melting into pure lust

you want
you desire me
to exhibit my
physical prowess

I'm aware of your
femininity
of your red blooded
and beating heart
together we'll explore
our sacred whore
and we'll return from paradise
desiring more more more

oh glory be
praise the sacredness
of true womanhood

(C)Lenny Gazb
owski
— Lenny of Cohen, Aug 22, 2008

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weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 9 months ago

Fuck me dead!

I already posted a comment here but it must have got lost. To re-iterate: very few can turn lust to the sublime. You have. Also very interesting to see you write in a very different content than I have seen before. Love to see it. cheers, Jess p,s hate the word whore
LC

Lenny of Cohen

17 years 9 months ago

Whore Man Lenny

thanks Jess for your comments,and for me I love the word whore !!! Its so nice!!! Just being me!!! Lenny PS Listening to Captain Beefheart.........on my pond buzzing for fireflies