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Aug 26, 2008
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Autumn (longing)
Within the vineyards sun whispers
Bacchus’ metamorphosis –
revival of pleasures and anger
Trees tremble their leaves in torment
for the wind will bring aging –
birds on the sky started their roving
Baudelaire, Verlaine, Rimbaud – their laughs,
wearing black and red, got still
The cold fog, the fist of leaves … my thrill
Ravens crossing the bloody sun
with apathy; an old gun
brings back to life the lost glow: Autumn
Bacchus’ metamorphosis –
revival of pleasures and anger
Trees tremble their leaves in torment
for the wind will bring aging –
birds on the sky started their roving
Baudelaire, Verlaine, Rimbaud – their laughs,
wearing black and red, got still
The cold fog, the fist of leaves … my thrill
Ravens crossing the bloody sun
with apathy; an old gun
brings back to life the lost glow: Autumn
Comments
Barbara Writes
17 years 8 months ago
This is a wonderful piece
yenti
17 years 8 months ago
Autumn
pinksheep
17 years 8 months ago
This
Marius Surleac
17 years 8 months ago
Thank you my friends
weirdelf
17 years 8 months ago
Superb imagery and craft as usual, no crit.
themoonman
17 years 8 months ago
no crit indeed...
autumnphoenix
17 years 8 months ago
Beautiful
whitetea
17 years 8 months ago
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Marius Surleac
17 years 7 months ago
Thank you all for your