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Ballerina

You have to be a ballerina,
dancing your life away
your slippers drenched in blood,
your black swan dying
from too much tenderness;
You have to be a wild woman
chained to a mighty oak
by The Good Shepherd
who lets you fall asleep and dream
you are Buddha
your dark tresses flowing in the
river of all your dreams,
you have to awaken
one day,
the sun in your eyes
laughing in the wide smile
of a torch-red poppy,
translucent
with the moon.





— Kailashana, Aug 21, 2008

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Emmanuel Moore

17 years 9 months ago

Hello

Rolwright is my best friend and he told me to tell you that he's sorry for not keeping in touch but he lost your number.He's sounding very self destructive tonight and he want's me to tell you don't worry about him even though his heart is destroyed He can't take it anymore and he really needs your support Please Help Me
weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 9 months ago

we all get messed up

I wish you all the best, Rolwright, Anna and all of us, I need it too. I don't know if you believe in prayer, but it's there cheers, Jess
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Rolwright

17 years 9 months ago

Don't listen

To that asshole He's a bad guy I can't stand him always talking like he trying to save someone when he can't save his own soul I hope he runs into a lightpole while he speeding in his 98 Dodge Neon
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 9 months ago

Rolwright. rolwright. rol

Rolwright. rolwright. rol w right I sent a square poem to you and it didn't quite turn out the way I wrote it. that asshole cares for you, R. what the f am I gonna do wid u? shaking her head, ummm mmmm mmm. ~A
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Samuel Johnnie Green

17 years 9 months ago

Good

Dancing means many things to people in different ways. Your way is spiritual and it clearly shows within this poem for a higher or lower purpose, depending on your view of life. Like the religious references as well. Moderately Good poem.