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Aug 21, 2008
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Ballerina
You have to be a ballerina,
dancing your life away
your slippers drenched in blood,
your black swan dying
from too much tenderness;
You have to be a wild woman
chained to a mighty oak
by The Good Shepherd
who lets you fall asleep and dream
you are Buddha
your dark tresses flowing in the
river of all your dreams,
you have to awaken
one day,
the sun in your eyes
laughing in the wide smile
of a torch-red poppy,
translucent
with the moon.
— Kailashana, Aug 21, 2008
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Critiques
Emmanuel Moore
17 years 9 months ago
Hello
weirdelf
17 years 9 months ago
we all get messed up
Rolwright
17 years 9 months ago
Don't listen
Kailashana
17 years 9 months ago
Rolwright. rolwright. rol
Samuel Johnnie Green
17 years 9 months ago
Good
Majeedahs_Umi
17 years 9 months ago
has no one figured it out yet