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thrombus


thrombus

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[the] crowd is not company,
and faces ... but a gallery
of pictures, and talk but
a tinkling cymbal ....
                                            ---Bacon
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early morning's incoming traffic
on I-94 snarled, clotted;

and vehicles pressing
at the rear---

like blood pushing hard against
a vexing stubborn mass,

a thrombus,

one that would/could not release
or break up---

contributed mightily
to the blockage

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Rett

Rett

17 years 8 months ago

Nice simile Chuck

Traffic congestion likened to a thrombus blockage. That is why I take platelet slickers also known as blood thinners. That one gave my heart a bit of a flutter. *LOL* Respectfully, Rett: "If life is a bowl of cherries, why am I in the pits?" Erma Bombeck
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easylife_2

17 years 8 months ago

Good write

I agree with Rett concerning the simile.Another good one.Thank you.
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 8 months ago

I like this

Smiles:) Barbara nice poem with great images of a blood clot It does serious damage as it block the flow of blood well illustrated by a traffic jam
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 8 months ago

thrombus

Another great write from you. It does get so frustrating. Some doctor should come up with a pill for traffic jams oh, I think they did~ High blood pressure pills lol. Nicely done Chuck!
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barbsdad2003

17 years 8 months ago

No, I ...

have not. But now that you mention it, I'll see if the libe's got a copy in-house. I'll check now while I have you on hold ... Nope, not here. But another libe has a copy, which I've reserved ... and will be notified by email when it arrives here. Thanx, Jess, Chuck
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amalzamani

17 years 8 months ago

Thrombus may lead to stroke!

I was hoping to see some relieve or even a disaster at the end…what was the end result?…bypass surgery?
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 8 months ago

Thrombus...

descriptive words here Chuck... sometimes it's best to drive 30 minutes around to avoid 10 minutes of crawling ... causing blockage in the viens.. brain and road.. I've been stuck on the interstate long enough to write.. or at least attempt a write ... good one Chuck! Richard