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Aug 19, 2008
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Treacherous Ways
Insincere kisses they place
On my cheeks and my face
Eager to please, I accept the
Meager offerings of affection
Of a family I am trying to please
One who should be as a mother
The other as a sister
Their promises of love as fleeting
As butterflies in Spring and as
shallow as the color orange
Tracherous hearts and surely
Unsaved souls
They withhold their love if I do not their bidding
And speak of me with evil tongues
"I knew she would be this way", they murmur
As they lower their eyes
And slide them to the left
Becoming as jackals in the heat of the
lion's kill, to take what they do not deserve
And I, eager to please, silently accept
The treacherous ways of a family I cannot appease
On my cheeks and my face
Eager to please, I accept the
Meager offerings of affection
Of a family I am trying to please
One who should be as a mother
The other as a sister
Their promises of love as fleeting
As butterflies in Spring and as
shallow as the color orange
Tracherous hearts and surely
Unsaved souls
They withhold their love if I do not their bidding
And speak of me with evil tongues
"I knew she would be this way", they murmur
As they lower their eyes
And slide them to the left
Becoming as jackals in the heat of the
lion's kill, to take what they do not deserve
And I, eager to please, silently accept
The treacherous ways of a family I cannot appease
— Linda Moses, Aug 19, 2008
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easylife_2
17 years 9 months ago
Good write
Linda Moses
17 years 9 months ago
Shallow orange
poewriter58
17 years 9 months ago
treacherous unsaved? who are
Linda Moses
17 years 9 months ago
Inlaws
DarkinAZ
17 years 9 months ago
ungrateful kids?....
Linda Moses
17 years 9 months ago
I will
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Really good Linda
Linda Moses
17 years 9 months ago
D
Linda Moses
17 years 9 months ago
Unsaved....correct
Samuel Johnnie Green
17 years 9 months ago
Good
Linda Moses
17 years 9 months ago
Apostrophe
Samuel Johnnie Green
17 years 9 months ago
Anytime
Barbara Writes
17 years 9 months ago
all i can say is
Linda Moses
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you
themoonman
17 years 9 months ago
Hi Linda...
Linda Moses
17 years 9 months ago
HI, Richard
zarul
17 years 9 months ago
INTENSE POEMS ON A FAMILY
Linda Moses
17 years 9 months ago
Zarul