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Aug 18, 2008
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Two Poems of Living
Luminous Life
Ahhh....
Luminous Life
how you deceive me!
how you take from me all that I am
and leave me nothing to speak of...
how you torment me
with my own tears
and ridicule me
with my own fears
how sublime you are!
how wondrous your imagination,
how unpredictable a friend,
my Beloved Lover, you steal from me
my very own breath
you shatter everything that has ever been mine.
An Honest Life
How brilliantly honest life is,
all that is yours
all that is mine
can never add
or subtract
even one moment.
The night falls without question,
thoughts come and go.
— Kailashana, Aug 18, 2008
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Critiques
themoonman
17 years 9 months ago
Hi Anna...
Kailashana
17 years 9 months ago
Yes sirreeee!! The miracle
weirdelf
17 years 9 months ago
I adore your poetry
Kailashana
17 years 9 months ago
You sure you didn’t mean
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Applause
Kailashana
17 years 9 months ago
Perhaps if you ask your