Am I your muse?

Am I your muse?
I've read your words and felt your heart
Your heart is still with me

Am I your pain?
I've heard your voice in song and sang with you
But your voice seemed far away
and we were unsure of harmony

My pain is your pain and my voice sings with your voice
But you are not with me and I am not yours.

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Comments

Barbara Writes

17 years 8 months ago

Nicely done

Smiles:) Barbara enjoyed reading it

Rett

17 years 8 months ago

Nice read Sophie

Interesting questions. Rett: "Life is like a beach. Salty, gritty, somewhat fishy and at other times, downright crabby!" Rett 2008.

sophie kant

17 years 8 months ago

ugh. love suddenly makes us all poets.

It's for a guy (well, ex boyfriend) who I think is writing about me, but I'm not really sure. I wrote this right after reading his poem. Well, I made another poem out of it, so life-jostling experience worth it. haha

yenti

17 years 8 months ago

Amusing

Poets oft work with reality in their thoughts, beware the truth will out. Nice to read. We await the outcome of this little battle of words.......la..la

zarul

17 years 8 months ago

nice work

a lot of self denying which i can strongly sense in here. nice work. keep it up. 5 thumbs up for you, my friend, my Asian friend. haha Smile + great hug = frind

sophie kant

17 years 8 months ago