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Misty eyed.

 MISTY  EYED.


Misty eyed and humbled faced,

he made the regulatory bow,

to the body lying on the bed, unmoving,

his childhood friend, turned foe.

 

Talking with mourners in whispers,

he was all sympathy and plea,

but under the surface somewhere deep,      

was there a flicker of glee?

 

As early friends they grew up together

traveling on all the pleasure routes,

and the success brought the ego in,             

jealousy burned the roots.

                                                                       

Differences turned into conflicts,

in turn creating hate.             

Enmity mushroomed between the two,        

who were once real soul mates.                                

 

They avoided one another,                           

but always waited for the recall,       

when it never came, resentment grew         

they prayed for the other’s fall.                               

 

He came out with strange thought, where

sorrow and satisfaction confusingly blends,

trying to work out what actually he lost,

a bitter enemy or an old friend.

 

By:-

Rahbar.

 

 


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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 8 months ago

deep

Smiles:) Barbara i can relate to this at times, trying to keep relationships alive. well written enjoyed reading the sad reality of this piece
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rahbar

17 years 8 months ago

Thank you

Hello Barbara...we all go through one or other painful relations...with pleasure and pain alternating in between...I am really happy you felt so close to this poem...all emotions are universal...thanks again. Rahbar.
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 8 months ago

I have learned at times my

I have learned at times my enemies are my best friends and my friends are quite possibly enemies in disguise. A good thinking (wo)man's poem. Bravo! ~A
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rahbar

17 years 8 months ago

learning is a contineous process.

Hello Kailash...every thing is subject to change...even the strongest of freindships..and we require friends and enemies both to understand ourselves better. your comment is very encouraging. Rahbar.
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amalzamani

17 years 8 months ago

it happens

all the time...The outer crust says "Friends" and the inner core says "Worst Enemy"....from what you describe, I don't think what joined them once was true friendship! I like the abcb pattern...it was almost invisible! if you thought of taking this poem one step farther, try working on the meter. Otherwise, this was very well expressed...enjoyable one...thank you Rahbar
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rahbar

17 years 8 months ago

Test of time.

hello Amal...a true friendship never changes...nothing can alter it ...but it is very rare too....and only the time can tell which is what...I write what comes from inside..I may not be technically perfect,,but..my shortcomings are mine alone..thanks for your advise. Rahbar.
whitetea

whitetea

17 years 7 months ago

Ive

Had something like this happen with a friend I grew up with. Id give anything to be around her againbut the trust is hard to find. Haunting write.